As you can see, he had a couple problems with my unit designations, and alignment. As I incorporated each change, I crossed it out, which accounts for the large x's. I wasn't too far off, but far enough to skew things had the unedited version gone to press. My initial draft was based on deep reading of the campaign, but still something short of expert. This is why manuscripts, and maps, should be scrutinized by the most authoritative people available — someone capable of spotting the problems.This last map is the revised version that appeared in the published book. Ah, now that's better.
